Rise again!


When it takes two hours to down your meal
Takes an effort just to swallow,
Eating becomes a struggle.
When you have to concentrate on your breathing,
Just to hold on,
Breathing becomes a task.
When it takes hours of lying down on bed,
Just to get sleep,
When it’s a struggle,just to wake up in the morning,
Sleeping becomes an escape.
When you start to cry n cry,for no reason
During everything and anything,
Crying becomes a help no more.
When it starts to feel empty inside,
A pit is formed deep down your stomach,
Life becomes a question mark.
When you don’t want to be the girl-
Who attempted suicide, cause you don’t need
The stares, the sympathy nor the pity,
You’d rather becomes the girl that committed suicide.
You have been battling it all by yourself,
For so long now that loneliness is a friend.
There is no hope,no tomorrow.
It’s all just today,an eternal misery.
When everything just falls apart,
You are exhausted, sick of the-
Effort it takes just to fake a smile,to survive
You don’t wanna try anymore,
Don’t wanna pretend and force a laughter again
Giving up becomes easier.
And that’s exactly when you have to rise again,
From the ashes.
Even if you fall down,
Even when you have to crawl,
Even if its the last thing you do,
You have to rise again.
Cause you are the phoenix.
And you will,always,rise again.

PS: The image here is purely my work- drawn by me on a pic from Google!

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60 thoughts on “Rise again!

    1. Thank you so much!! Means a lot!! ❀

      Oh plssss!! Prrrrr..you should never underestimate yourself, you are an amazing writer and I already adore you!!! 😊☺


    2. You think this person here was underestimating herself…
      It’s her way of telling you are venturing over her territory, and back off!
      Indirectly she says GAME ON !

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      1. Hahaaa Lol!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ don’t encourage her ok. We are both from Kerala and will really kick your ass given the chance!!
        And lol am not venturing over anyone’s territory!! This is just poor me pouring my heart out for the entire world to see(*too much drama I suppose*)

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      2. I apologise to say that u may be in her territory…. You both are on the same territory(Kerala) … Both maybe trying to rise from the ashes to be the alpha female maybe …

        I really think you should hide these comments for they are completely off topic… These comments are meant for Fb and not wp… :p

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  1. This was amazing! For a moment I really did think the girl once contemplating suicide!

    Your words just got the feel there, and that is great Writing!

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  3. I could relate to most of the lines here and my past. I’m really glad to have come across your blog dear friend, your talent runs deep, you have a gift in this art. – Cezane

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    1. Every single line in this poem is something I have actually felt. Am really honoured to know that you could relate to them and hope that you have found the phoenix in you.

      Thank you so much!! You really did make my day! πŸ™‚

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  4. Wow! I literally indulged myself reading every line. Eagerly waited for the next line before I had actually read the previous line. Amazing! 😊

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